I have forgotten how to dream
but that is not
entirely true
it is an imbalance
of chemicals within
that holds me away
in the night
in REM
that state
needed, required
for utmost rest
The question
that big,
biggest
one
“Then whose dream, am I in?”
Am I
a figment
of your dream, now
labelled ghost!
That question,
my dream
loose connections
rehydrated reasons
where, when, once
alone, in the day
the light of lone
I slow my outward
breath
to a crawl,
like a caterpillar
the wise one
the mad one
that one
From that story
a children’s
tale of
change
But I have forgotten
how to dream
and in whose dream
am I to know ?

{cater[butter{man}fly]piller}
Presuming you know Chuang-tzu and his “dream”?
No do you have a link?
http://www.the-philosopher.co.uk/butter.htm
Nicely wirtten,Bruce
Thank you, the formatting was a bit of a pain but worth it
I wish I could remember the name of the short story by Jorge Luis Borges where a man is dreaming and in the end discovers that he himself is a dream figure in someone else’s dream (he discovers this in a very memorable way). Your poem reminded me of that great story. . . now I have to find it and read it again. Excellent work as always, Bruce.
Thanks Jeremy, feel free to pop a link over as it sounds interesting
Beautiful insights.
Thank you very much Millie
I like this very much. It is something I told myself once: I’m part of …. dream. It’s a great sensation of free-ness… when I know I’m just playing a part in someone else’s dream.
You have said it very well.
Thank you very much
Fantastic and nicely penned…
Thank you very much